
Lord Madara, Please Read it Again
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My name is Masumi, and I am an ordinary teacher at the ninja school. Gender is male, hobby is female, Goldfinger is "Naruto" mobile game. My students include but are not limited to Uzumaki Naruko, the nine-tailed jinchuriki, Uchiha Sana, an orphan whose family was wiped out by her sister, Nara Shikahime, who has a very high IQ but is always lazy, and Hyuga Nene, the Byakugan eldest lady who has an aloof personality and is burdened with the clan separation curse...
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Poison spot
The reason why the protagonist became Itachi was to help Sana come out of the shadows. This means that the protagonist is a good person, but giving up Yuchiha to Japan is too much. . . After all, the protagonist's starting point is to avoid tragedy for those around him. If Uchiha Mandarin gives birth to a child, will the protagonist be responsible? Is the child his own? And the current protagonist is no different from a scumbag. It's like having a child with her (Yuan) in the name of someone else (Itachi). Although it seems that you and I are willing to do so, the problem is that this is based on a lie. After all, the protagonist is not Itachi. You understand Yuan, but Yuan does not understand you. What he understands is the Itachi you said and played. She is thinking in her heart that you are me and I am you, and we are atonement together, but the poisonous point is that What you are fucking about right now is acting, so act well. Don't write emotional scenes with doppelgängers or childbirth scenes, because to put it nicely, you are an actor, to put it worst, you are a liar, a scumbag, what will you do when the child is born? You can't just visit their mother and son once or twice a week, after all, you still have to live your own life. And if I'm not wrong, Naruko, Tenten, and Ningning are also the protagonist's harem group. What I want to say is, the author, don't talk about the protagonist in such a lofty manner, and talk about respecting others for the protagonist. Because the protagonist is cheating Uchiha Mandarin, so the essence of the protagonist is a liar and a scumbag (because the protagonist is not another her). In fact, I quite liked reading this book at first. After all, you use someone else's identity to pretend to be a B. This is the charm of this book, but now the poisonous point is that you use your own avatar to have children with others, and you are lying to her. I can't stand it anymore. Anyway, let me tell you that it looks pretty good in the early stage, but I won't say anything about the poisonous points later on. You understand. . . I've almost guessed the rest of the plot. Anyway, it's a system upgrade, and then you can go out independently, or the protagonist's lie will be exposed, or it will continue like this.
So poisonous
What do you think, author? I see that you haven't answered the question about the relationship between Tobi Uchiha and the protagonist. Let me ask you how you want to write it? So that we readers can decide whether to continue pursuing it. First, you turned Uchiha Itachi, Sasuke and some Akatsuki members into women and then used the clones to guide them. Then he used his clone to seduce Uchiha Tobi. The clone has been deeply ingrained in the hearts of these people. How can he make those who are captured by the clone accept him in the future? Being able to capture them all depends on Uchiha Itachi's identity. When they found out that Uchiha Itachi was just a stand-in, what did they think? What's more, the main body has conquered many people. Using clones means you can't use the main body. How can you take care of two groups of people at the same time? Not to mention that Uchiha Tobi wants to get pregnant. What will happen if she gets pregnant? How do you take care of it? Do you really want to run around in two parts for the rest of your life? Can you run over? Or are you, the author, going to work on the golden finger? What kind of system update can really summon the characters, have their own thoughts, and then make a wedding dress for others with what they do? That is extremely poisonous. In addition, the protagonist is really a scumbag. When I read the chapter about Tobi Uchiha, I felt sick in my heart. How can you take care of them and give them a home when you are a clone with a shameful identity? Originally, Uchiha Itachi's identity was to take care of Sana. Since he doesn't like them, then he should be cut off. Unless your true body no longer wants Naruko, and your true body no longer wants Naruko, no matter what you do every day, the result will be what you say. It directly ruins the gentle and elegant character that the author has always created. The summary is that the relationship between the main body and the clone is poorly shaped, resulting in many poisonous points. It was originally possible to save it, but until the chapter about Uchiha Tobi, how to save it? There are two possibilities in the clone flow, one is that the clone belongs to the main body, and the other is that the clone is independent. Because it is impossible to split one's body and run in both directions. The clones return to the original body, how to deal with these girls, it was okay not to have sex with them originally, but what to do after they fall in love? Is it difficult to say: "Hey, the one you like, the one who fell in love with you is actually my clone, are you happy?" If the girl forgives you, it is just a mindless acceptance of girls. After all, I really can't think of many ** girls who will accept the setting that the person they like is a stand-in, let alone some thoughtful and capable girls. If a girl doesn't forgive you, it will be even more vicious. As for the independence of avatars, I really can't think of any author who would write such a brilliant and disturbing story. The reason why no one writes about the clone genre now is that it is much more toxic. Even if someone writes about the clone genre now, it is for the sake of a reasonable plot and not as the main plot. Girls who fall in love with the clone will soon know that it is just a clone. Even the author who really writes about the clone genre will be careful to avoid poisonous points. It's good for you, just step on the poison point and hit it accurately. If you save it now, it's not too late. Although it's still a little poisonous, it's harmless.
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After reading the latest chapter, I roughly understand the general framework of this book. It should be that the male protagonist uses the system to transform into characters to expand some plots. There is always a sense of déjà vu to see what Sakamoto is doing (yes, that guy). The pace is slow but unique, and the plot is something I really didn't expect. Even if the male protagonist loses his vest in front of Ning Ning, I still think, "Oh, normal operation, don't panic." Visually, the male protagonist has conquered many people since then. Naruko, Shikahime, Sana, Yuan, Ningning, Sandai, Hizu...(Walking towards Qingqi) Yes, I already want to stand in line in the harem. (The dog's head saves life)
First review
This is the first time I have written a review since I read the article online. In the past, I would read articles while diving, and when I was excited, I would yell "fuck you!" A few times. This book is not a pretentious and slap-in-the-face text, at least not so far. The plot progress is relatively slow, but I was unexpectedly excited~ Especially the scene where Ning Ning is a guest at the hero's house, she can't help but smile like an aunt. (Neji Nissan, I'm sorry for you, I laughed so wildly) The male protagonist has a very good rapport with the opposite sex. If it were any other novel, I would just think that this guy is having a harem again. However, in this book, maybe it's because of the author's portrayal? I feel that the male protagonist is a very gentle person. But I don't want to have a harem. It's a bit like a farming story about raising children, warm and slightly sad. The only thing I am curious about is the gender of the author. Although male authors sometimes mix with female authors, the same goes for female authors. Normally I wouldn't pay too much attention to this matter, but at this moment... I really can't help it. Logically speaking, it should be a male author of a male video, but the author's description of Uchiha Yuan's appearance was unexpected... That's probably all. I will continue to pay attention and remember to take good care of your body. I will sit in the back row and wait for the finale.
Author duck
I can tolerate if you update every day, and I can tolerate if you don't update, but I can't bear if you don't update.
The more I read, the more I want to hit the author
The author, your writing is a bit confusing. What you write later becomes more and more blurry and there is no protagonist at all. There are only clone scenes summoned by the protagonist. It is getting more and more annoying to watch. I really want to put the specialty 40-meter sword on your neck.
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Official(245)Scraped 21d ago
Poison spot
The reason why the protagonist became Itachi was to help Sana come out of the shadows. This means that the protagonist is a good person, but giving up Yuchiha to Japan is too much. . . After all, the protagonist's starting point is to avoid tragedy for those around him. If Uchiha Mandarin gives birth to a child, will the protagonist be responsible? Is the child his own? And the current protagonist is no different from a scumbag. It's like having a child with her (Yuan) in the name of someone else (Itachi). Although it seems that you and I are willing to do so, the problem is that this is based on a lie. After all, the protagonist is not Itachi. You understand Yuan, but Yuan does not understand you. What he understands is the Itachi you said and played. She is thinking in her heart that you are me and I am you, and we are atonement together, but the poisonous point is that What you are fucking about right now is acting, so act well. Don't write emotional scenes with doppelgängers or childbirth scenes, because to put it nicely, you are an actor, to put it worst, you are a liar, a scumbag, what will you do when the child is born? You can't just visit their mother and son once or twice a week, after all, you still have to live your own life. And if I'm not wrong, Naruko, Tenten, and Ningning are also the protagonist's harem group. What I want to say is, the author, don't talk about the protagonist in such a lofty manner, and talk about respecting others for the protagonist. Because the protagonist is cheating Uchiha Mandarin, so the essence of the protagonist is a liar and a scumbag (because the protagonist is not another her). In fact, I quite liked reading this book at first. After all, you use someone else's identity to pretend to be a B. This is the charm of this book, but now the poisonous point is that you use your own avatar to have children with others, and you are lying to her. I can't stand it anymore. Anyway, let me tell you that it looks pretty good in the early stage, but I won't say anything about the poisonous points later on. You understand. . . I've almost guessed the rest of the plot. Anyway, it's a system upgrade, and then you can go out independently, or the protagonist's lie will be exposed, or it will continue like this.
So poisonous
What do you think, author? I see that you haven't answered the question about the relationship between Tobi Uchiha and the protagonist. Let me ask you how you want to write it? So that we readers can decide whether to continue pursuing it. First, you turned Uchiha Itachi, Sasuke and some Akatsuki members into women and then used the clones to guide them. Then he used his clone to seduce Uchiha Tobi. The clone has been deeply ingrained in the hearts of these people. How can he make those who are captured by the clone accept him in the future? Being able to capture them all depends on Uchiha Itachi's identity. When they found out that Uchiha Itachi was just a stand-in, what did they think? What's more, the main body has conquered many people. Using clones means you can't use the main body. How can you take care of two groups of people at the same time? Not to mention that Uchiha Tobi wants to get pregnant. What will happen if she gets pregnant? How do you take care of it? Do you really want to run around in two parts for the rest of your life? Can you run over? Or are you, the author, going to work on the golden finger? What kind of system update can really summon the characters, have their own thoughts, and then make a wedding dress for others with what they do? That is extremely poisonous. In addition, the protagonist is really a scumbag. When I read the chapter about Tobi Uchiha, I felt sick in my heart. How can you take care of them and give them a home when you are a clone with a shameful identity? Originally, Uchiha Itachi's identity was to take care of Sana. Since he doesn't like them, then he should be cut off. Unless your true body no longer wants Naruko, and your true body no longer wants Naruko, no matter what you do every day, the result will be what you say. It directly ruins the gentle and elegant character that the author has always created. The summary is that the relationship between the main body and the clone is poorly shaped, resulting in many poisonous points. It was originally possible to save it, but until the chapter about Uchiha Tobi, how to save it? There are two possibilities in the clone flow, one is that the clone belongs to the main body, and the other is that the clone is independent. Because it is impossible to split one's body and run in both directions. The clones return to the original body, how to deal with these girls, it was okay not to have sex with them originally, but what to do after they fall in love? Is it difficult to say: "Hey, the one you like, the one who fell in love with you is actually my clone, are you happy?" If the girl forgives you, it is just a mindless acceptance of girls. After all, I really can't think of many ** girls who will accept the setting that the person they like is a stand-in, let alone some thoughtful and capable girls. If a girl doesn't forgive you, it will be even more vicious. As for the independence of avatars, I really can't think of any author who would write such a brilliant and disturbing story. The reason why no one writes about the clone genre now is that it is much more toxic. Even if someone writes about the clone genre now, it is for the sake of a reasonable plot and not as the main plot. Girls who fall in love with the clone will soon know that it is just a clone. Even the author who really writes about the clone genre will be careful to avoid poisonous points. It's good for you, just step on the poison point and hit it accurately. If you save it now, it's not too late. Although it's still a little poisonous, it's harmless.
Comments that are not comments
After reading the latest chapter, I roughly understand the general framework of this book. It should be that the male protagonist uses the system to transform into characters to expand some plots. There is always a sense of déjà vu to see what Sakamoto is doing (yes, that guy). The pace is slow but unique, and the plot is something I really didn't expect. Even if the male protagonist loses his vest in front of Ning Ning, I still think, "Oh, normal operation, don't panic." Visually, the male protagonist has conquered many people since then. Naruko, Shikahime, Sana, Yuan, Ningning, Sandai, Hizu...(Walking towards Qingqi) Yes, I already want to stand in line in the harem. (The dog's head saves life)
First review
This is the first time I have written a review since I read the article online. In the past, I would read articles while diving, and when I was excited, I would yell "fuck you!" A few times. This book is not a pretentious and slap-in-the-face text, at least not so far. The plot progress is relatively slow, but I was unexpectedly excited~ Especially the scene where Ning Ning is a guest at the hero's house, she can't help but smile like an aunt. (Neji Nissan, I'm sorry for you, I laughed so wildly) The male protagonist has a very good rapport with the opposite sex. If it were any other novel, I would just think that this guy is having a harem again. However, in this book, maybe it's because of the author's portrayal? I feel that the male protagonist is a very gentle person. But I don't want to have a harem. It's a bit like a farming story about raising children, warm and slightly sad. The only thing I am curious about is the gender of the author. Although male authors sometimes mix with female authors, the same goes for female authors. Normally I wouldn't pay too much attention to this matter, but at this moment... I really can't help it. Logically speaking, it should be a male author of a male video, but the author's description of Uchiha Yuan's appearance was unexpected... That's probably all. I will continue to pay attention and remember to take good care of your body. I will sit in the back row and wait for the finale.
Author duck
I can tolerate if you update every day, and I can tolerate if you don't update, but I can't bear if you don't update.
The more I read, the more I want to hit the author
The author, your writing is a bit confusing. What you write later becomes more and more blurry and there is no protagonist at all. There are only clone scenes summoned by the protagonist. It is getting more and more annoying to watch. I really want to put the specialty 40-meter sword on your neck.
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First person. (Not very adaptable) This book must have been posted to the wrong website. This book is more suitable for dirty readers. The girl turns into Hokage + the stomach medicine is non-stop.



A Naruto fanfic... This book emmm, the author has the ability to transform into another ninja, turned into Itachi (male) and slept with Itachi (female) and then Itachi became pregnant...




Dead pigeons, the more pigeons, the more I want to see them I was circumcised a long time ago and haven't left the womb yet. I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and this book impressed me the most. His style of painting is different from others Anyway, it looks good

































