The Plane Trading System of the Doomsday Master

It may be planned according to the long-term plan... Who knows the current mechanism☹️ A good book died in infancy

I rarely post comments, this book is worth reading

A very nice article, very inspiring and touching.

It was okay after reading a few chapters, but there were too many wavy lines! ! It was painful to watch. .

The subject matter is novel and beautiful. Please update more frequently.

The content and synopsis of the story are good, but the writing style is a bit poor.

Is there a male protagonist? Is there a male protagonist? Hey, hey

We tied it, and we saw progress. For example, the problems of wavy lines and no dividing lines were later solved. Many sudden transitions made me collapse before. There was no transition foreshadowing or reminder. In the last sentence, A was still doing this, and in the next sentence, B was doing that. If the author has time, it is better to learn how others write.

I've finished reading it, overall it's pretty good, but it's a bit rushed.

I feel like I can write a long article, the 2 million kind. I can write about a few more apocalyptic planes. There are a lot of things that can be expanded, such as family, friendship, love, family and country. Very good article, what a pity!