Doomsday Spirit Master

The overall book is really good, but the ending is a little sloppy, but I firmly believe that if I continue to write this book, it will be a perfect book! Thank you to the author!

The background of the protagonist is not clearly explained at the beginning. After reading the entire book, I felt that there was no complete outline. The protagonist is good at using big guns, so why does he always use a knife at the beginning? Not good at marksmanship? If it was not good, why did it suddenly become so great later? Later, it was mentioned that the heroine Zi Yuan taught him spear skills. Why did she teach him? To put it bluntly, as long as they are learning martial arts, how many weaklings and weaklings are there? It was written earlier that the protagonist loves to smoke, but he has not appeared since. I changed pets in the early stage to trick the current pets. I don't want to say anything. I am not a saint. Maybe I can give it away after more people complain. When I killed the first heaven-level zombie, I said that I had to remove two eyes in order to pluck out the horns. The bead was broken, and then the two-foot-long horn appeared within three chapters. I said that I later regretted destroying the eyes of a pair of heaven-level zombies. I didn't mention this at all later. Let's not talk about other settings for the time being. The details of the god-level were not explained clearly. Where did the ring come from? Then, in the last few dozen chapters, I just made up words perfunctorily and briefly mentioned it. The heroine's surname is He, let's not mention it for now, the other is Ziyuan, and she has a cousin named Zimo. At first, she was somewhat interesting to the male protagonist, but later she was not mentioned at all, and the endings of other spiritual pets were not clearly described. In the end, there was a return of the king riding a golden-winged roc. The background description is unclear in one sentence, the main plot is unclear, there is no outline, and the emotional description is unclear. In the end, there is only a golden-winged roc, and the other gods are not described. Oh, there is a black turtle, and how the golden-winged roc was conquered is not described. Where did the boss of Yuanshenhui, Li, go? Where is the foreigner who tried to deceive the protagonist but was deceived instead? One ran away, and the other was not sure whether he was dead or not. At least these two people could write dozens, or even hundreds, of chapters. Someone was studying zombie viruses and wanted to make an antidote. Who did the research? What are the results of the research? There is no description at all. In the end, I just wrote about killing zombies and almost being wiped out by the group, and then the main character The King Returns. I won't write the rest. I don't know if these can be published. By the way, why are Mao charging readers for the words after the last chapter The King Returns?

Either the summoned beast has no intelligence and should be discarded when necessary, or the summoned beast is intelligent and can advance and expresses feelings, and it should be discarded when necessary. Don't you think it's cruel? Although it is said that one general can achieve a great success, but if his own people suffer a bad end, the protagonist is not as good as the first person in the small village at the beginning. The summoned beast is not an object, but a relative! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I really hope there is a sequel! ! ! The ending is too simple! But still very good! Come on! ! !

Let me give you my recommendation votes first, and then let's talk about this book. The plot is profound, the language is simple and unpretentious, and the pig's feet are full of personality. It is as exciting as the "Taoist Exorcist" I have read. 😹😹😹😹💩💩💩💩💩

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The writing is okay, but the protagonist is too cruel. Those monsters have saved the protagonist so many times and have no emotion at all? Say sacrifice, sacrifice

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The author is great, please urge me to update, please update, update... Update... Update... Sofa, small sofa, chair, small chair, stool, small stool, bench, small bench, carpet, floor

The author is great, please urge me to update, please update, update... Update... Update... Sofa, small sofa, chair, small chair, stool, small stool, bench, small bench, carpet, floor #What is your impression of Bing Xin? #