The Apocalypse is Coming, I Can See Hidden Hints

Someone commented on the plot between the protagonist and Zhang Ming at the beginning of the book. The male protagonist is the Virgin. Here is a unified reply. The reason I wrote this at the time was that the male protagonist was an ordinary person who had just come to the end of the world. Because the other person looked at his weapon a few more times, he really doubted that the other person was not good to him, but it was just suspicion. If he kills the other party just because of suspicion, I don't think it fits his setting. Of course, the most important thing is to have the strength and confidence. As for Zhang Ming, as a villain, adapting to the post-apocalyptic life faster than the male protagonist, the male protagonist means nothing without Goldfinger. Please look at the above. The male protagonist is just an ordinary person. Judging from his reaction and behavior after coming to the apocalypse, I feel that he has surpassed most people. He dares to think and do, is not tempted by women, and can control his inner desires. If you still want to hold on to Zhang Ming, Is there a possibility that he is a foreshadowing?

Chapter 18, the appearance of Anya and Meng Yue, had several readers and me reacting to the poor writing. How to put it, first of all I have to admit that this plot was not well designed or well written. Anya is set as a doctor. Compared with ordinary people, she is thoughtful, adaptable and able to withstand stress. She has a special skill and is lucky enough to open a treasure box and get a life potion at the beginning. Her starting attributes are higher than others. Under such circumstances, she did not ask for protection just because she was a girl. Instead, she actively asked the male protagonist to leave zombies for her to kill, and she consciously handed over the crystal core. She was considered smart, so she was not a vase in the team. As for Meng Yue, my original intention in designing this character was to make her represent a real ordinary person and to witness her growth. From the very beginning when she appeared, the male protagonist did not look down on her. From the time she followed Anya and asked to kill zombies, to the 18th floor where she asked to kill zombies, and then later witnessed the male protagonist killing enemies (humans), and now she is able to accept killing the mutated neon people who are not yet dead. I think I have written her growth, but my writing and plot control are not very good, so the character description is not very good, so it is not written well. As for the male protagonist, the Holy Mother, I don't agree with it. The male protagonist was just a deal from the beginning. Later, he discovered Anya's advantages, but because of Meng Yue's drag, he did not show any intention to recruit. It was not until Meng Yue's performance made him feel that it was okay, and with the appearance of the team contract, Anya and Meng Yue were officially recruited. They should not be considered the Holy Mother. After all, for the male protagonist, his teammates do not need to be very strong, but first of all, they cannot be a drag, and secondly, their character must be passable. The same goes for Zhang Xiaodao. The male protagonist has always been wary of him. He specially handed the pistol to Anya (based on the premise that the male protagonist knew that the pistol was no longer a threat to him) and told her to beware of Zhang Xiaodao. It was not until Zhang Xiaodao's subsequent performance that he invited him to be a teammate. I really appreciate the pertinent suggestions from friends who read my book. I also feel deeply ashamed that my writing, characterization and plot control are not good enough. I am really sorry. I hope that the subsequent plot can make everyone change.

This book has received mixed reviews, but I think it is fundamentally a very well-written book. First of all, I think the handling of the character Song Jiang is very good. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before who always chatted with Lin Daiyu and did not do his job properly. Including the scene where Xiahou Dun fights Xu Sanduo was also shot very well. Always in place, completely subverting Xu Sanduo's negative attitude in our minds Risky XL image. Moreover, Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Gangu from the beginning as stated in the original work, but the sparks sparked with her after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference. In this way, the logic of the plot becomes very smooth. Let The audience has a refreshing feeling. The plot of the story is also silky Engaging and engaging. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Xiao Tian Quan's wife, Teacher Cang? These questions tightly locked the audience's attention. The final fight scene between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck was well arranged, and the open ending made the audience yearn for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. It is worth mentioning that the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life in the Qiu Ming Mountain where Big Big Wolf missed Zhou Zhiruo suddenly made Ren Wo Xing Steal Uchiha The delicate inner world of Huba, the clan's sacred object, is revealed. The stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang, who guest-starred in the film, and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to help his grandfather are also highlights. All in all this is a good book. (Bah, I'm so shameless!) In short, I still hope that everyone likes my story. If you can support it as much as possible, use your sacred little hands to click on recommendations and monthly votes or interact with me to let me know that someone is watching. Thank you all.

Very good, keep up the good work, author😷

I hope there will be stronger skills or abilities in the future

I don't know why I can't stand it anymore.

I give the following three points about this book: ... I will give the following six points about the problems that arise in this book: ... I have two suggestions: .. Hey, I wish you all a happy viewing

To be honest, it's a bit watery, and the author himself didn't expect to give it 5 stars.

Pretending to be so cold-blooded, he used false names for men and real names for women. He found an excuse to trade with a knife for protection for three days, and then deliberately wrote that the two women would be useful and then stayed with him. I guessed it without looking at the back, but after looking at the catalog, the two women were still there. So your half-stallion, half-Madonna looking for excuses is even more disgusting.

The evolutionary flow of zombies in the apocalypse. The male protagonist has an online IQ, is not a virgin, and kills decisively.