Slam Dunk Core Players

Not much to watch, but very smooth. As the title says, let me tell you why I gave it 4 stars. Since this is a Slam Dunk fanfic, when I saw that the protagonist chose to join Lingnan, I subconsciously didn't want to read any more. After flipping through the chapter titles, I found that the protagonist actually joined Lingnan in the end, and I was ready to abandon the book. It's not the author's writing problem, it's just that I don't like it. It feels inconsistent with the world view. It was originally about passionate struggle and the weak defeating the strong. However, the protagonist went to Lingnan, Lingnan is very strong, right?

Brother, when you write about Slam Dunk, you have to focus on the core. You don't understand the core of Slam Dunk. Let me analyze it for you. Those who watch Slam Dunk are all those born in the 1980s and 1990s. People of our age group who can read novels are basically bitter. Haha, yes. Watching Slam Dunk means I still want to feel the passion and passion that Slam Dunk brought to us when we were young. The most important thing is the feeling between brothers that a slam dunk master would have. If your protagonist doesn't write about the home team or follow the home team, it's totally against the rules. I think When you wrote about not entering Shohoku, I immediately stopped reading. Since you no longer write about the home team, even if you don't write about slam dunks, you will continue to write about basketball. But you are an Asian and a Japanese. You have no system and don't give any special skills. Boom boom. Going up there and saying how awesome you are is also jarring and doesn't give you a sense of immersion. When you first wrote about junior high schools, it felt good because your writing skills were also good. But when I saw that I couldn't enter Xiangbei, I read hard and I really couldn't read it anymore. I hope the author can have the opportunity to write a slam dunk about joining the home team. I don't mean to criticize the author. The writing is good. I just want to tell the author why I personally can't stand it.

I didn't see it, but I saw it was a bit bland. The main character's body and the skills in his previous life were in junior high school. It's hard to explain why he's not one-on-one.

After writing so many chapters, the heroine has not even appeared. Could it be that she is a eunuch?

Didn't I say that I would also write about the NBA? You just finished it

If you want to experience the plot, then go to Xiangbei. If you want to win the championship, Lingnan is indeed more suitable, and Lingnan's popularity is not low. I have seen 200 chapters so far, and it is still far away.

The storyline is okay, let's talk about the bad parts: 1. The description of the game is too over-the-top. There are basically just a few main players. It looks like it's 4 on 4 or 3 on 3, and the other players on the field are as if they don't exist. 2. There are basically no tactics at all in the game. It feels like the author has nothing else in mind except duel. 3. Some parts of the plot are too taken for granted. For example, a team like Sanwang does not have to be a seeded team. It is impossible for the host committee to make such arrangements.

Um, let's not talk about the settings for now, but judging from your description of the basketball game, I don't think you are an amateur, but you can't describe your passion for basketball at all, the collision of tactics, the confrontation in one-on-ones, those classic tricks that have been famous for a long time, various fancy dunks with footwork, and detailed descriptions of movements. The rest is just a bunch of verbosity. Do you think it looks good? It's like when I go to watch an NBA game, I stare at the scoreboard the whole time and appreciate the players' various extraordinary and fancy scoring. Is it the same feeling? You just write about the scoreboard, right? You don't feel anything at all.

Rubbish, deliberately letting the protagonist lose, one round out of the national competition, a professional player is so rubbish, you might as well set the protagonist to be an amateur [emot =default,01/]

The best slam dunk fic I've ever read so far