
Time Travel 85: the School Beauty with Special Abilities Cannot Be Offended
by Yan Liao
About This Novel
An accident caused An Zixi to travel back to the 1980s, wearing blue pants, braids, and a serious village girl. It's just that this little village girl's life is not very good. Her father and mother are dead, and there are still people who are preventing her from getting into college! This is great! ? An Zixi is busy sharpening his sword, and with spatial powers in hand, his sister wants to play with the Eight-Five and reach a new peak in life. Just... The artistic senior said: Junior sister, I like you, please be my girlfriend! The cold and tough man said: I want to be with you! The soft and cute milk dog said: Sister, my stomach is not good and I want to eat softer food. An Zixi waved his hand, and everyone got mad. I just want to pursue a career! Shao Jinyang smiled slightly, my name is career.
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Official(32)Scraped 5d ago
The overall story is good and very suspenseful, but there are so many hardships that it makes me depressed!
Ever since the heroine traveled back in time, she has been constantly persecuted, framed, slandered, and slandered. Even without the best assassination, the heroine would have encountered murderers, robbers, and kidnappers... Of course, the heroine is also very powerful and solves all the difficulties she encounters, but dirty water is also dirty, okay? The key is that the "source of conflict" has not been resolved. The heroine has solved the old troubles, and new plots have followed. Although the novel is about "twists and turns", the author, don't you think there are too many twists and turns, which makes people feel very uncomfortable? Moreover, the heroine has obviously found the mastermind of the package swap conspiracy, but she seems to have let it go, and she doesn't know when they will be exposed, otherwise the heroine's college life will never be peaceful!
This author is too lazy😂😂😂
This author must not be too lazy😘😘😘Don't rush me, the author will give you a chapter every day when you are unhappy. What should I do if the author of my favorite novel is angry? Coax him, pamper him, or fix him.
Updates are too slow.
It looks good but updates are too slow.
The author is big: small suggestions
Great author, I feel that this book is full of loopholes. As a foodie, how can I not put anything in it if I have space? And space is the perfect place to keep secrets, right? For example, the main money, as well as gold, gold necklaces, gold bracelets, jade, etc., Should be left in some space, right? It is normal to put other money in the bank, but you should keep some of it with you. You must also put some medicines and other things, grab, grenade, etc. Anyway, it is correct to put some of everything. Although there is divine water in the space, this divine water must not be used casually. Medicine is a good explanation. If something happens, these things are life-saving. This space is soul-bound. Logically speaking, these things should be preserved, as long as the heroine's soul is immortal. ② Of course, if the author had written that all the things that traveled through time and space were crushed and turned into ashes, this explanation would be more reasonable. But you, the author, did not write it. This is very misleading. There is no logic at all. Everyone is an adult and at least their IQ is online. There are some things that the author would be better off explaining. I just read Chapter 11 of this book and found that many readers have raised these doubts. I will officially remind you. ③I am a reader of your other book
In Chapter 127, it's not good for the heroine to be like this. Don't be like this.
It's an arm wrestling match between two girls, and the heroine has to help her roommate cheat? Even if the heroine is very skilled in martial arts, she can't break the rules. If the girl has a problem, I won't say anything. But girls are just naturally strong and have a desire to win, and they are still competing in front of so many people. Don't you think about the girl's face? A normal person hopes to win by relying on his own strength, right? After all, your roommate grew up on the grassland, so he must be a generous person. Although it's a small thing, it's really important. How do you, the readers, think about the heroine's character? A character who can't afford to lose? Don't be like this, my outlook on life is normal and I can't tolerate any sand in my eyes.
Too slow, please update! Let's do an update
Hope there will be more updates every day
I hope there will be updates every day, and the flowers will fade after waiting!
I hope the author of this article will stop writing the heroine in such a virginal light
The previous story about the supernatural wife couldn't stand it after reading more than 300 chapters. In this article, the heroine was set to be a ghost king in her previous life. To be honest, such a person would not have much compassion, and he is very rational. When the heroine sent Zheng or something to prison, why didn't she send him there herself? She also asked the village chief to send him there to stabilize his status. . Also, the heroine doesn't know why she is so nice to Liu Dazhuang. After just one meeting, she felt that he could be used by her in the future. She gave her money and helped her mother find a hospital. That person has not done anything to her yet. Also, don't have so many top-notch people. Can you get some normal people? In the novel, those who are not top-notch people are people who have a good relationship with the heroine. Can the heroine not make some friends who are not consistent with her own vision and outlook in the future? Find someone who is equal to you. Even if there is a male protagonist, don't make it too awesome. The most important thing is that the female protagonist is a modern person and not from that era. Even if you are with the male protagonist in the future, don't always care about the male protagonist's family.
This book is good. I just need to update it to make some progress 😂
Apart from the occasional typo, everything else is fine and to my taste, but! The update time cannot be delayed too long.
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Official(32)Scraped 5d ago
The overall story is good and very suspenseful, but there are so many hardships that it makes me depressed!
Ever since the heroine traveled back in time, she has been constantly persecuted, framed, slandered, and slandered. Even without the best assassination, the heroine would have encountered murderers, robbers, and kidnappers... Of course, the heroine is also very powerful and solves all the difficulties she encounters, but dirty water is also dirty, okay? The key is that the "source of conflict" has not been resolved. The heroine has solved the old troubles, and new plots have followed. Although the novel is about "twists and turns", the author, don't you think there are too many twists and turns, which makes people feel very uncomfortable? Moreover, the heroine has obviously found the mastermind of the package swap conspiracy, but she seems to have let it go, and she doesn't know when they will be exposed, otherwise the heroine's college life will never be peaceful!
This author is too lazy😂😂😂
This author must not be too lazy😘😘😘Don't rush me, the author will give you a chapter every day when you are unhappy. What should I do if the author of my favorite novel is angry? Coax him, pamper him, or fix him.
Updates are too slow.
It looks good but updates are too slow.
The author is big: small suggestions
Great author, I feel that this book is full of loopholes. As a foodie, how can I not put anything in it if I have space? And space is the perfect place to keep secrets, right? For example, the main money, as well as gold, gold necklaces, gold bracelets, jade, etc., Should be left in some space, right? It is normal to put other money in the bank, but you should keep some of it with you. You must also put some medicines and other things, grab, grenade, etc. Anyway, it is correct to put some of everything. Although there is divine water in the space, this divine water must not be used casually. Medicine is a good explanation. If something happens, these things are life-saving. This space is soul-bound. Logically speaking, these things should be preserved, as long as the heroine's soul is immortal. ② Of course, if the author had written that all the things that traveled through time and space were crushed and turned into ashes, this explanation would be more reasonable. But you, the author, did not write it. This is very misleading. There is no logic at all. Everyone is an adult and at least their IQ is online. There are some things that the author would be better off explaining. I just read Chapter 11 of this book and found that many readers have raised these doubts. I will officially remind you. ③I am a reader of your other book
In Chapter 127, it's not good for the heroine to be like this. Don't be like this.
It's an arm wrestling match between two girls, and the heroine has to help her roommate cheat? Even if the heroine is very skilled in martial arts, she can't break the rules. If the girl has a problem, I won't say anything. But girls are just naturally strong and have a desire to win, and they are still competing in front of so many people. Don't you think about the girl's face? A normal person hopes to win by relying on his own strength, right? After all, your roommate grew up on the grassland, so he must be a generous person. Although it's a small thing, it's really important. How do you, the readers, think about the heroine's character? A character who can't afford to lose? Don't be like this, my outlook on life is normal and I can't tolerate any sand in my eyes.
Too slow, please update! Let's do an update
Hope there will be more updates every day
I hope there will be updates every day, and the flowers will fade after waiting!
I hope the author of this article will stop writing the heroine in such a virginal light
The previous story about the supernatural wife couldn't stand it after reading more than 300 chapters. In this article, the heroine was set to be a ghost king in her previous life. To be honest, such a person would not have much compassion, and he is very rational. When the heroine sent Zheng or something to prison, why didn't she send him there herself? She also asked the village chief to send him there to stabilize his status. . Also, the heroine doesn't know why she is so nice to Liu Dazhuang. After just one meeting, she felt that he could be used by her in the future. She gave her money and helped her mother find a hospital. That person has not done anything to her yet. Also, don't have so many top-notch people. Can you get some normal people? In the novel, those who are not top-notch people are people who have a good relationship with the heroine. Can the heroine not make some friends who are not consistent with her own vision and outlook in the future? Find someone who is equal to you. Even if there is a male protagonist, don't make it too awesome. The most important thing is that the female protagonist is a modern person and not from that era. Even if you are with the male protagonist in the future, don't always care about the male protagonist's family.
This book is good. I just need to update it to make some progress 😂
Apart from the occasional typo, everything else is fine and to my taste, but! The update time cannot be delayed too long.









