Engineering Students in Tang Dynasty

Who was attracted by the cover and liked it?

It's uncomfortable no matter how you look at it. Suddenly I figured it out. Does the author work as a screenwriter for trash TV series? Generally speaking, novels also need to have storyboards. This book always makes people feel uncomfortable reading it. The storyboards are all over the place. Sometimes I wish I could divide a page into ten shots. Sometimes, the whole story is rambled on. When reading novels, it is important to have an immersive experience. The problem is that your storyboarding is sometimes too fast to allow you to be immersed. Sometimes the whole article talks about some foreshadowing things. Plus the wording of your novel won't be offensive at all. The writing is fine. This makes people feel like they have been hungry for several days with a piece of cake in front of them. But my teeth couldn't bite. How do you say that? Shit chocolate and chocolate shit. But fortunately, the background is the famine era, so he can also swallow shitty chocolate. But when I am no longer hungry, I will immediately throw it into the toilet.

I have read more than 100 chapters of this book, and I really can't stand it anymore. It's too confusing. There is no central idea and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. The plot seems to have no logic. It just flies off the page as I write. I feel like I can't connect. The author should work harder. Maybe your style is not suitable for me, but I really admire you for being able to write so many words.

I came in after seeing the cover.

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This article describes the various aspects and dark realities of the gradual transformation from an agricultural society to a society of elite capital in a joyful way.

1. The writing and historical skills are very good, and the intention of showing the social changes in the early Tang Dynasty is also very good. 2. Too self-indulgent and the plot is scattered 3. It's not exciting, at least from the reader's point of view, the protagonist has been oppressed by various powerful people. 4. The main plot is unclear. I abandoned it after reading more than 200 chapters. The protagonist has no purpose and is just a hammer here and a stick here and there. 5. All top dignitaries, whether civil or military or emperors, are portrayed as ruffians. They don't pay attention to appearance at all, and they don't reward their merits. It's as if they don't have any backers, and they only squander the benefits. All in all, it has obvious advantages and disadvantages and is not suitable for online writing.

The novel is written in a ridiculing tone, and I feel like I can only read it once in a while, but if the whole novel is in this style, it will be difficult to read.

The writing is really good. It vividly reflects the ugly side of people and things in the development of society in a humorous way. I personally feel that it is the best one written in Tang Chuanli.

I have read more than 30 chapters and I just can't stand it anymore. Nima, it's all narration, and the total dialogue spoken by the characters in the book's 30 chapters is less than 200 sentences. Author, are you writing a novel, or are you just fooling around? [Emot=default,32/]