Reborn Little Maid

The background and plot of the story are very good, but the inner activities of the characters, whether they are the protagonists, supporting characters or even the ones who are the main ones, are written in a tedious way. It takes more than ten chapters to explain the transition of a plot, which made me feel depressed while reading it. Fortunately, I am not chasing books, otherwise I would be sick, so it is okay to skip reading. It's just my own perception. You can refer to it. I'm still very optimistic about you.

The writing is too cumbersome, and the dialogue feels like an old lady's random thoughts, making it difficult to read.

I haven't finished reading it yet. It's pretty good so far, but I always feel that there is too much nonsense in many places. It's too wordy and difficult to read. I also feel that many people in the book have a common problem, hesitating, procrastinating, and not being decisive at all~

... The only ancient article that I had any expectations for. This is the only time I want to send a razor blade to the author. . Hahaha. As a maid. Being calm to the young master, being sensible, and treating friends sincerely are both advantages and disadvantages. If it is better, it is called innocence, but if it is not, it is called death quickly. Being too affectionate and not being defensive. The heroine knows how to play music, chess, calligraphy and painting, and has the demeanor of a lady, so she should be a gentle and elegant young master, and the male protagonist is set. He grew up with the second son who was the direct daughter of the Duke of Guo, and he and the eldest lady were best friends. I think it is rational not to be moved by the second son. I don't think that under such influence, she was a person who hated marriage and behaved frivolously, so she fell in love with someone who was good to him. Previously, she was self-reliant. After leaving the Duke's residence, she chose to attach herself to the Piao Bureau, or to someone who had helped her. When they met for the first time, the man touched her, even if she fainted, just put her on the ground. There were several men watching, not polite, not to mention calling her sister-in-law before they were married. That is not unruly, that is self-righteous. The author's description is enough to ruin a woman's favor. It is too embarrassing to watch later. I guess you are a person who doesn't like women. The first part was probably written by someone else. Later, the author probably got angry. If you are angry with women, don't be angry. Women hold grudges! !

It's pretty good, but it's a bit verbose. Every sentence is split into eight parts, which makes me anxious.

The more I write, the more verbose I become

First, before leaving the house, when the sisters parted, they gathered together with a few people and said the same meaning over and over again. Although I admire the author's writing skills and his ability to use different words to describe the same meaning. The second is that everyone here talks a lot. A big conversation in two steps is still very trivial and has nothing to do with the heroine. I didn't think it at first, but when I saw Chapter 135, when planning and arranging to leave the house, when talking about the key strategy, ellipses were used... [Emot=default,19/] So what was going on in the previous big conversation! ! ! Third, my God, in chapter 135, I haven't even left the mansion yet. The author uses such detail that every relevant minor character has a large description, and each involved minor character can use several chapters... I'm convinced... Seeing this, my reading patience was exhausted. I became more and more irritable and gave up on the article.

The Old Lady's Foot Wrapping is smelly and long. I have to write several chapters for one thing, but there are no ups and downs. I don't feel nervous, excited, or moved. The writing is not contagious. I hope the new work will be better.

I don't like the male protagonist's second marriage . . . . .

The more I write, the more verbose I become