The System is Very Abstract, but Luckily I Am Too

How to put it this way, it's funny for the sake of funny, abstract for the sake of abstraction, the plot arrangement and character creation basically have no highlights, many places are stiff and deliberate for the purpose of inserting funny characters, and the characters are abrupt and flat, maybe it's because of the flaws of the writing style.

After reading the first few chapters, I don't know why. The high school life described by the author is all about talking about dirty jokes with classmates. Is this what high school students are like now?

It's very good, but it's too abstract and not suitable for me. The writing style is a bit unstable, and it may cause people to suddenly feel boring at a certain point and stop reading.

It is recommended that the author use less vulgar memes, because vulgar memes are something that lowers the reader's perception. These memes may attract some readers, but they will also damage the reader's perception. Funny is funny, but there are still some relatively vulgar jokes, such as shit and shit, vulgarity, personal attacks, etc. What I am very uncomfortable with is the ridicule of Zhou Baowei, which makes me feel disrespected and insulted to Zhou Baowei. The author may want to show their poor-tongued but loving side, but I only feel insulted. It feels like the author uses a lot of personal attacks and even insults, rather than ridicule. It would be much better if Zhou Baowei was a handsome guy with good grades. A particularly abrupt section is the inner monologue of someone approaching the squad leader, but it feels like there is no silver in this place. The explanation highlights Lin Li's affectation. It feels like he should directly admit that it is for beauty rather than for the system's tasks. He said, "It's all because the squad leader looks good, not at all because having system tasks may be more in line with the character." When I play memes, most of them are vulgar memes, which easily make me feel uncomfortable, because I have the impression that high school students don't use so many swear words, and the high school students described by the author look more like adults or ruffians. The description of the protagonist's family background feels very abrupt. On the one hand, Liang Yang is arranged to reveal Lin Li's family relationship, and on the other hand, it is said that Lin Li does not care. There is no hint that the protagonist will care about family relationships. This makes me feel that the plot of Liang Yang caring about Lin Li is unnecessary. Either it can emphasize that Lin Li does not care so that readers think he may care about it, or use complete relief to highlight the protagonist. I don't care, but the direct transition with a few too disconnected jokes gave me a confusing feeling, making me unable to feel whether the protagonist cares or not. I kind of wanted to make a joke where you thought the protagonist would take it seriously but I suddenly made a joke unexpectedly, but instead felt a sense of insecurity. Next time I look forward to a serious plot or a climax plot, I will also play a joke. This also made me lower my expectations for the squad leader and Lin Li getting along later. The contrast between the treatment of Wang Yuezhi and the treatment of the squad leader did not make me feel the protagonist's attention to the squad leader due to the contrast. Instead, it made me feel Lin Li's low quality, because Lin Li did show his annoyance to Wang Yuechao and Wang Yuezhi also showed due restraint and tolerance. Lin Li's counterattack later highlighted Lin Li's overreaching. It may be better to reduce the patience to Wang Yuezhi and show the protagonist's restraint.

Can only give a general answer. It looked okay from the front, but I quickly became tired after repeatedly playing tricks. The main plot has not advanced at all. It has more than 300 chapters and I no longer want to read it.

A collection of bad memes. Eighty percent of the whole text is bad memes. There is no story. If I want to read bad memes, why don't I go to TikTok and read the comments?

What a pity, such a good idea, it's a pity that the story drags on and keeps making jokes.

A book that is moderately funny and abstract is an advantage, just like "The Ultimate Demon" written by Gokai. In the book, Lu Sheng often said, "I, Lu Sheng, am able to reach the realm I am today, all because of my extraordinary talent... Deep Blue, add some points!" This contrast of emphasizing one's own talent on the surface, but actually relying on system points, creates a unique humorous effect, and "dark blue points" has become a famous meme! But in this book, apart from jokes and jokes, whether it is a conversation or a plot, it is full of jokes and abstractions. There is no story at all. There are no jokes to embellish the plot. It will just be a bad joke. The more you read, the more boring it becomes. It is very tasteless...

Everything is too much and too little. The more I read your book, the more disgusting it becomes.

I thought it was okay at first, but I really couldn't stand the part after entering the institute. To put it mildly, it was too out-of-touch. Those who say it poorly are idiots. Really stupid. A high school sophomore, only 17 years old, dancing like this in front of Uncle Hat? It also adds all kinds of bad jokes and vulgar jokes. If the style seems okay in the front, it is completely poisonous in the back. I don't know if this will be deleted or blocked. But I think so. Probably.