The Immortal Path of Rebirth
by Skull Evil
About This Novel
The right hand holds an umbrella and the left wrist hangs a bell. He stepped on the pagoda and said wantonly, with a little gold and platinum between his eyebrows. "Where does such a person with a bad style come from? I think he is just as despicable as her parents who secretly communicate with the demon clan!" "That's right, get out of Haoyuan Sect quickly--" Others say that I live up to my Taoism and am in vain, but I want to be wanton and arrogant, embarking on a road that is beyond their reach! ---------------- To sum up: the story of a woman trying to control her own destiny after being reborn... [The story is slow to develop (I wrote it for five years)\u002F Some readers said it was bloody (I think it is okay)\u002F The early stage is not strong\u002F There are not many golden fingers (because I am a stepmother)] But the full text is free... This is the only one I can boast about\u003C(｀^?)\U003E
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Official(7)Scraped 9d ago
It's too fast paced and has no context.
It feels like watching a story in fast forward. For example, the heroine asked her senior sister to take her to the bookstore. There was no process or background, and they arrived. There is also an old man who is the gatekeeper of the bookstore. He actually said to a child: Children nowadays really don't know how to respect the old and love the young. An old man complained that his children did not respect the elderly and love the young. I feel like I'm saying this without thinking. The author has his own experience in saying this without thinking. I gave it a negative review and felt that the plot was quite good. I gave it a positive review but the story background was too sloppy and the plot was not fast-forwarded and detailed.
The heroine is still stupid after being reborn. The gold-building elixir caused her Dantian to break.
I would rather watch the original heroine, who is cold and decisive in killing. Unlike the current heroine who is stupid and not tough enough, there is something wrong with the gold-building dantian and the broken monster weapon spirit. The more you watch it, the less interesting it is.
I feel like the heroine is a bit weak in the early stages.
So I added a little bit later to make the heroine more powerful.
I hope the author will update soon.
I look forward to the author updating it quickly, please come on
Big, come on.
Mwah! Hee hee hee, keep at it!
Urgent update! ! ! ! ! !
Big! Big! ! Big! ! ! Big! ! ! Urgent! Even! ! La! ! !
No more writing? It's a bit of a pity. I remember you said you were going to open a new pit.
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Official(7)Scraped 9d ago
It's too fast paced and has no context.
It feels like watching a story in fast forward. For example, the heroine asked her senior sister to take her to the bookstore. There was no process or background, and they arrived. There is also an old man who is the gatekeeper of the bookstore. He actually said to a child: Children nowadays really don't know how to respect the old and love the young. An old man complained that his children did not respect the elderly and love the young. I feel like I'm saying this without thinking. The author has his own experience in saying this without thinking. I gave it a negative review and felt that the plot was quite good. I gave it a positive review but the story background was too sloppy and the plot was not fast-forwarded and detailed.
The heroine is still stupid after being reborn. The gold-building elixir caused her Dantian to break.
I would rather watch the original heroine, who is cold and decisive in killing. Unlike the current heroine who is stupid and not tough enough, there is something wrong with the gold-building dantian and the broken monster weapon spirit. The more you watch it, the less interesting it is.
I feel like the heroine is a bit weak in the early stages.
So I added a little bit later to make the heroine more powerful.
I hope the author will update soon.
I look forward to the author updating it quickly, please come on
Big, come on.
Mwah! Hee hee hee, keep at it!
Urgent update! ! ! ! ! !
Big! Big! ! Big! ! ! Big! ! ! Urgent! Even! ! La! ! !
No more writing? It's a bit of a pity. I remember you said you were going to open a new pit.
