Crypt Survival: Start by Digging into Lava at the Beginning

Overall. Not bad. Nothing too wrong. It still suits the taste, otherwise I wouldn't have watched it for so long. I personally think there are shortcomings, so don't criticize me. 1. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't force it. A trio, the girl and the captain. The sudden feeling of affection or affection seems so awkward. Skeleton King's emotional scenes are pretty good memories and not so embarrassing to watch. 2. Personally, I think this book may be almost finished, a balance pendant. Also some kind of thunder prop. It can be said that it can probably end a lot of things. There's nothing wrong with wanting to play with it unreasonably. Although the outline may have just begun, Sanctuary is almost at its full level. Shelter is not written as important and interesting as it should be, and it is a bit of a rundown. The words of the plot introduce two people, he and the system. Maybe the final result can be given at the end. 3. It's human nature. It feels too sloppy and fails to describe the good and bad aspects of human nature. The human nature is very bland, or there is no outstanding character portrayal. The overall look is very bland. As for the male protagonist, the writing really has no characteristics and is a bit forced to write the character, but there is no good supporting plot and environment. Also, to be honest, I've finished watching it and still can't remember the male protagonist's name, so the name is a bit useless. 4. I feel that the composition of this book has advantages and disadvantages. The disadvantages should be the strange props, interesting shelters, and profound character sketches. I have not written any feelings about these three aspects. Advantages: The main line focuses on system tasks. This outline is very good. It looks very smooth. Is there any obvious reduction in intelligence, but the shortcoming is that you have a system. However, the confusion of the trading system without a clear standard is not what it should be. 5. Summarize the advantages and disadvantages of this book An excellent and logical outline is the motivation for reading this book. Ignored the key characterization, ignored the interest of the shelter, and ignored the trading system standards. I think the writing is okay. Don't forcefully write emotional scenes. Imagination is also possible, and each crypt does seem to be partly novel. One is the title system, although only two or three are written. But I can feel that the author has some ideas. But the book may not show that.

It was written too deliberately. No golden fingers. No plug-ins. No adventure. It's so boring to watch. I don't know what the author wanted to write. None of the above. This book is half useless. Let's see how the remaining half goes. Read a few chapters. If you target the protagonist, you should target the protagonist. The writing is also boring. Wu Gaochao Wu settings are not introduced in detail. It gives people a feeling of muddling through.

The emotional scenes are a bit too drawn out. Can be skipped. The battle areas feel like the ink marks can be skipped. There are still many blocking points that can be skipped, but there are too many pitfalls. Please don't be foolish. Please don't be foolish.

It's still the curse of changing a novel in a hundred chapters. The protagonist takes the initiative to hunt human beings who have no grudges and just want to save their lives, so I know that the next movie should be changed.

Is there no need to raise wasps? Besides, wasps eat meat. Goblins can't see the use of it even after several times. What do you mean?