The Little Junior Sister Just Wants to Cultivate Immortality Silently
by A Cat That Loves To Eat Fish
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Official(1)Scraped 11d ago
The article suggests that it still needs to be retouched. The span is too large, and many details are not described. The dialogues have no coherent descriptions, scenes, scene descriptions, and character descriptions. Otherwise, it is very rough. It's too soon to start practicing at the age of one. Can the muscles and veins withstand the spiritual energy tank? 🙄🙄 The heroine's spiritual roots were tested when she was one year old. Even her parents didn't care (it was too cold and her own daughter was worthless), not to mention the sect? My brother is a genius and my sister is a loser. The treatment is really different.
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Official(1)Scraped 11d ago
The article suggests that it still needs to be retouched. The span is too large, and many details are not described. The dialogues have no coherent descriptions, scenes, scene descriptions, and character descriptions. Otherwise, it is very rough. It's too soon to start practicing at the age of one. Can the muscles and veins withstand the spiritual energy tank? 🙄🙄 The heroine's spiritual roots were tested when she was one year old. Even her parents didn't care (it was too cold and her own daughter was worthless), not to mention the sect? My brother is a genius and my sister is a loser. The treatment is really different.
