Store the Heavens

If you see it, please give it a like. After all, it's not easy to make five cents.

Paired with the name on the right and the one below, it's perfect

For the first 20 chapters, I give it five stars! There are many advantages... The transition between the main world and Naruto is not cliché, and the system is not redundant, especially the task achievements, not the tasks. It's fun to let the protagonist follow him instead of being led, and it's also a bit funny. Pity! In the middle and later stages of Naruto's life, he was completely boring. He was a little neurotic, doing all kinds of meaningless things, and drinking Namikaze Minato's wedding wine. Doing things neurotically, earning points by the way, and having no idea what you are doing. Naruto went straight to the world starting from scratch, and then it changed. I don't know what you wrote, and a system maker popped up. Isn't this just like traveling to another world and meeting your destiny? It makes people feel stupid. When I read your novel, what I see is your imagination of storing the original, and the friction it creates in the plot world. Putting the cart before the horse. Very disappointed.

Before Chapter 110, I always felt that the protagonist was very good. Suddenly the system creator appeared, which made people feel depressed and gave up.

I love this author so much (⑉°з°)-♡

It's just making a wedding dress for others. The typical example is that you are a scapegoat and a fool. Those who are not loyal to you will be killed. They don't even think about how they would live a paradise life if it weren't for you. Those people are not worthy of protection at all. And don't forget the mission. If you still repair the book for them, you will be overthrown sooner or later. Hey... You guy! Are you trying to recreate the human race? So what should we do? " "This guy looks very weak, and he's not of my race, so why should I treat a weak scum of a foreign race well? ! But what gives Chu Guan a headache is that none of these orcs seem to have passed the system's follower determination, so Chu Guan's current followers are still a few thousand, and they have not broken through to 10,000 at all. , But after all, he still looks like a human being, so many orcs are not willing to admit that he is their leader at all. Instead, they regard the cat girl Kailu as their leader and express that they will always follow her footsteps. Of course, Chu Guan has also taken many measures, such as praising his merits and achievements before. However, for some reason, the number of Chu Guan's followers is still pitifully small.

I think the main character is a psychopath. I feel like he has a headache. The difference in his thoughts is too big. The plot is good.

1. Even with that dagger hand, why don't you absorb water molecules first, but wait for others to come over and absorb them? 2. The protagonist's IQ is not very good. He has the dagger hand, but he can't use it. It does not absorb the water molecules in the world, but only absorbs other people's attacks. Can't you breathe in the air from trees and grass?

I don't know if I have obsessive-compulsive disorder, but the shuriken in the first chapter is still stuck in the protagonist's arm, and the author didn't describe how to remove it. It's so uncomfortable π_π

It was okay before. I also recommended it to others. Now I completely regret it. The writing is too perverted. The aesthetic is not as good as a novel without a female protagonist. It would be better if it was darker.