Dude, please, renew one chapter, just one chapter,😭😭😭 one word is ok, please, I'm not running, bro, I'm really itching, please, I'm good, I'll never make a scene again😩😩😩. Please, brother, update my chapter, I'm itching to death😢😢😢, please, brother, you give me one last time, I beg you, brother, I'll give you anything you want. Just give me a little bit more,😫😫😫 I'm like ant crawling in my body, it's too itchy, brother, give me some, last time, I swear, It's really the last time😖😖😖 ah ah ah hey hey ho ho ho ho ho ah good, More and more ah ah ah ah my bones 😤😤😤 ha ha ha ha no ants crawl again itch ah ha ~ I want to fly ah ah ah I am a small Butterflies ha ha ha ha ha good cool ah,🤯🤯🤯 ha ha ha, ha ha, ha... I'm dizzy ah... ha... ah... ah...? Whoops? Something wrong? Hey, hey? What's wrong? Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey,🥵🥵🥵 it's raining. I'm itching... ants bite me, I'm itching, I'm sick, I'm hot... I'm sick... I'm flying again, I'm upside down… 😱😱😱How come I'm upside down... flowering, red and blue, And the long legs... Don't climb to my face... 😨😨😨Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...😵😵😵
修改说明
因为本书关于某人种杀戮过重导致被举报，现进行修改，对诸位读者造成困扰作者在此抱歉。
她无耻，她弑杀，她双标，她出口成脏！
但是你tm就是打不过她！
Dude, please, renew one chapter, just one chapter,😭😭😭 one word is ok, please, I'm not running, bro, I'm really itching, please, I'm good, I'll never make a scene again😩😩😩. Please, brother, update my chapter, I'm itching to death😢😢😢, please, brother, you give me one last time, I beg you, brother, I'll give you anything you want. Just give me a little bit more,😫😫😫 I'm like ant crawling in my body, it's too itchy, brother, give me some, last time, I swear, It's really the last time😖😖😖 ah ah ah hey hey ho ho ho ho ho ah good, More and more ah ah ah ah my bones 😤😤😤 ha ha ha ha no ants crawl again itch ah ha ~ I want to fly ah ah ah I am a small Butterflies ha ha ha ha ha good cool ah,🤯🤯🤯 ha ha ha, ha ha, ha... I'm dizzy ah... ha... ah... ah...? Whoops? Something wrong? Hey, hey? What's wrong? Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey,🥵🥵🥵 it's raining. I'm itching... ants bite me, I'm itching, I'm sick, I'm hot... I'm sick... I'm flying again, I'm upside down… 😱😱😱How come I'm upside down... flowering, red and blue, And the long legs... Don't climb to my face... 😨😨😨Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...😵😵😵
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是这种修女么
到目前为止，这本书算得上是粮草，前面写轮回同人的那本我也觉得不错可是你不写了。
有人会做封面么？
想把这图做封面
备用封面图。
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没有核心立意
第一看不出来主角的追求，人设上似乎只想和各种高手打架，所以我们熟悉的电影角色一个个出场，再一个个被ko 。这样有点没意思的。再加上有些血腥的描写感觉像是在恶心读者。其次修女混乱邪恶的性格确实有够混乱有够邪恶，但这样的性格没有交代来由，他为什么混乱，为什么邪恶，主角曾经历过什么导致的这样性格，这些都没有交代。如果是穿越人设，那么大多数穿越者都会是守序的，这里是让我感觉主角性格不讨喜的地方。第三个就是这是一个怎样的故事呢，他的核心立意是什么，我觉得大多数以漫威为背景的故事里，主角都是想要改变一些原著的遗憾之处，他会救一些人，杀一些人，漫威的故事就会变成作者的故事。 给一个建议，一些人物主角也许不用和他们打架，给一些其他的描写，把人物描写立体起来会更好
你这战力看得我一脸褶皱。性格跟诸天恶魔差不多类似。果然大女主文我还是喜欢看百，书架收藏了，以后再见，作者加油。
说明一下害怕太监的问题
第一本书是《女帝但是轮回乐园》，不知道套路新人试水作品，连初步审核和交叉审核都不知道，从零开始写到十万字签约失败，还坚持更了8w字左右，最后实在没人看了才切。 然后写了三本都没过审核，也不知道哪里违规。 第二本是《葬送的桔梗》，很用心写了，我感觉比这本要好，但是不要说过签约，连看的人都没有。 然后就有点生气，同一时间写了五本小说的开头，两本没过审核，剩下的三本，分别就是 《美漫里的修女》， 《一拳不够？千手观音》， 《天剑大师姐》 想着哪本过就写哪本。 没有恶意太监的前科的。