I like the whole story , but the word "閒"真的有點礙眼
Are you gonig to change it or not?
However, I believe that you won't change it because I know you would say:"啊~~隨便啦~~"
喜欢餅乾的那一段
TO迷大大:迪迪最喜欢喝黑咖啡了呢!!尤其是Columbia & Brazil,只能用"super great"来形容~~~呵呵…
TOFormer Driver: it's my pleasure to write this article for you!
treat it as a gift for you drive us to Napa Valley~~~haha...
hope you'll like it
I've tried to leave a message here 1000x already, never worked...but oh well, I'll give it another shot.
Thanks for writing this story for me, didi, :)
I owe you one.
没…没敢看… 看起来很虐,不过看了一下感觉文笔很好,所以我更加不敢看了…T-T 其实我只想说S酱你居然连悲剧也写的么…
咋一看思绪很诱人,文章的设置我也觉得很棒,看似断开的东其实有着意想不到的深刻联系,还很吸引人思考,本人看第一遍后就有点似有感悟但又抓不住的感觉,没办法再看一遍,还是抓不住,也许正是作者没有明说开来,反而更加的吸引人,更能让人人都以一篇属于自己的此文吧 一些场景的描绘暗示道理的地方最赞,简单但又很不简单,每当看到那些简单的场景描绘却让我停留下来思考… 如果满分是10分的话我至少给9分,不能给满分的原因是个人觉得个别点的文笔还有提升的空间;还有看到英语就头大...otz
短 简单 没有华丽的词藻 却因此而变得很美 很幽怨 也好心酸 咖啡 灯 音乐 饼干 关于他的一切挥不开散不去... 于是乃成功打动了一个寂寞家里蹲的心= =+
我很三八地问一句,他是谁?
好喜欢关于咖啡的那一段 还有灯,用一明一暗暗示两个人的关系 作作大人好厉害喔!
I like the whole story , but the word "閒"真的有點礙眼 Are you gonig to change it or not? However, I believe that you won't change it because I know you would say:"啊~~隨便啦~~"
喜欢餅乾的那一段
TO迷大大:迪迪最喜欢喝黑咖啡了呢!!尤其是Columbia & Brazil,只能用"super great"来形容~~~呵呵… TOFormer Driver: it's my pleasure to write this article for you! treat it as a gift for you drive us to Napa Valley~~~haha... hope you'll like it
I've tried to leave a message here 1000x already, never worked...but oh well, I'll give it another shot. Thanks for writing this story for me, didi, :) I owe you one.
看了有些感动,我也是爱咖啡者,喜欢关于那段咖啡的理论。