瀑布汗… 虽然我懂英文，但也不用给我写那么多…
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抱抱～～ 还是谢谢你了！
first of all , i just wanted to notice that i didn’t over simplfy the Iraq issue~ it’s just that i don’t wanted to write too much about it in the story~ the point is that i am focus on the plot of the story! i had enough reality evidence~ so i don’t think i have to add more~
second of all, i must say that the describtions i did to the "Empire" is kindda… freaky! and i also accept what you said, i will try to change that… but i don’t understand that you said that we have to understand the people of the "Empire", people can do nothing in the "Empire", or let’s say Americans~ they are bunch of foolhardys…
you said it well, as American’s point of view, their dream is peace, freedom, full human rights and equality for every person in every nation~ as you already know them, their dreams, the dream that would poorly recieved by other nations… what do you still expect?
Allow me to be honest: You describe an Orwellian world that, frankly, shows very little parallel to reality. The story of 1984 exists only in the soul of a poet that is troubled by the fate of the human race, not a maniac’s wildest dreams. And less still has it any relationship with the current state of affairs in America today. The concept of a government -- be it imperialism or communism, doesn’t matter which – that controls with an iron fist and does not even bother with the pretense of a silken glove, is the worst nightmare of the American people. Their dream is peace, freedom, full human rights and equality for every person in every nation, regardless of their circumstances. That such a dream is only theirs and would be poorly received by other worlds, they could not understand. That is their cause of their tragedy, not their evil.
I think that you over-simplifies the problems of Iraq. If the USA’s motive for war was truly one of profit, that makes them human. I can think of more absurd reasons to begin a war. The fact is that America did not create the issues that exists in the Middle East; whether their intervention had worsen the situation is something for Clio, the goddess of history, to judge over the long term. The full effects of a war cannot become apparent in one generation. T’is too soon for us to judge.
Your story describes human beings, tortured by their nation as well as their faith. They are believable, as true as the coutless souls in the course of human history that were broken and dying at each other’s hands. Victims are real; we recongnize them and sympatheize with them. But the Empire in the story is difficult to be percieved as real . . . as faceless evil tends to be. It’s my belief that a blind hatred for evil is at least as dangerous as evil itself. Until we understand that the people of the Empire, and sympathize with them also, we can do nothing about their wrongdoings. They too are human beings, striving for what they consider to be the best; their promises of freedom are sincere. To willfully destroy them will be imortal, with or without the ten billion names. Yous said it well: convert evil into kindness . . .
Your story describes human beings, tortured by their nation as well as their faith. They are believable, as true as the countless souls in the course of human history that were broken and dying at each other’s hands. Victims are real; we recognize them and sympathize with them. But the Empire in the story is difficult to be perceived as real . . . as faceless evil tends to be. It’s my belief that a blind hatred for evil is at least as dangerous as evil itself. Until we understand that the people of the Empire, and sympathize with them also, we can do nothing about their wrongdoings. They too are human beings, striving for what they consider to be the best; their promises of freedom are sincere. To willfully destroy them will be immoral, with or without the ten billion names. You said it well: convert evil into kindness . . .
Try to use that saying in your attitude towards the Empire in real life. Christ tired to do that, as did the Buddha. They had succeeded. Let us hope that we can do the same.
有有很有想像力啊~~~~平行世界以及善与恶的交换，神与魔鬼的十亿个名字，都十分有吸引力~ 另外，文笔也十分不错呢~加油~有有大有前途~ 缺点么~相对来讲，故事性弱了一些，呵呵~不少的篇幅拿来讲鲍尔的平行世界理论了，笑。 我觉得，这篇可以作为一个类似大纲的存在，保留下来，等以后有有进步了，有能力写长篇了，再把这个拿出来好好写。 当然，看有有是不是有这个想法了。呵呵。
瀑布汗… 虽然我懂英文，但也不用给我写那么多… ５５５５５５５５ 抱抱～～ 还是谢谢你了！ first of all , i just wanted to notice that i didn’t over simplfy the Iraq issue~ it’s just that i don’t wanted to write too much about it in the story~ the point is that i am focus on the plot of the story! i had enough reality evidence~ so i don’t think i have to add more~ second of all, i must say that the describtions i did to the "Empire" is kindda… freaky! and i also accept what you said, i will try to change that… but i don’t understand that you said that we have to understand the people of the "Empire", people can do nothing in the "Empire", or let’s say Americans~ they are bunch of foolhardys… you said it well, as American’s point of view, their dream is peace, freedom, full human rights and equality for every person in every nation~ as you already know them, their dreams, the dream that would poorly recieved by other nations… what do you still expect?
Allow me to be honest: You describe an Orwellian world that, frankly, shows very little parallel to reality. The story of 1984 exists only in the soul of a poet that is troubled by the fate of the human race, not a maniac’s wildest dreams. And less still has it any relationship with the current state of affairs in America today. The concept of a government -- be it imperialism or communism, doesn’t matter which – that controls with an iron fist and does not even bother with the pretense of a silken glove, is the worst nightmare of the American people. Their dream is peace, freedom, full human rights and equality for every person in every nation, regardless of their circumstances. That such a dream is only theirs and would be poorly received by other worlds, they could not understand. That is their cause of their tragedy, not their evil. I think that you over-simplifies the problems of Iraq. If the USA’s motive for war was truly one of profit, that makes them human. I can think of more absurd reasons to begin a war. The fact is that America did not create the issues that exists in the Middle East; whether their intervention had worsen the situation is something for Clio, the goddess of history, to judge over the long term. The full effects of a war cannot become apparent in one generation. T’is too soon for us to judge. Your story describes human beings, tortured by their nation as well as their faith. They are believable, as true as the coutless souls in the course of human history that were broken and dying at each other’s hands. Victims are real; we recongnize them and sympatheize with them. But the Empire in the story is difficult to be percieved as real . . . as faceless evil tends to be. It’s my belief that a blind hatred for evil is at least as dangerous as evil itself. Until we understand that the people of the Empire, and sympathize with them also, we can do nothing about their wrongdoings. They too are human beings, striving for what they consider to be the best; their promises of freedom are sincere. To willfully destroy them will be imortal, with or without the ten billion names. Yous said it well: convert evil into kindness . . . Your story describes human beings, tortured by their nation as well as their faith. They are believable, as true as the countless souls in the course of human history that were broken and dying at each other’s hands. Victims are real; we recognize them and sympathize with them. But the Empire in the story is difficult to be perceived as real . . . as faceless evil tends to be. It’s my belief that a blind hatred for evil is at least as dangerous as evil itself. Until we understand that the people of the Empire, and sympathize with them also, we can do nothing about their wrongdoings. They too are human beings, striving for what they consider to be the best; their promises of freedom are sincere. To willfully destroy them will be immoral, with or without the ten billion names. You said it well: convert evil into kindness . . . Try to use that saying in your attitude towards the Empire in real life. Christ tired to do that, as did the Buddha. They had succeeded. Let us hope that we can do the same.
吼吼！ 朋友看完后说我写得太短！！！ 打击我？？？！！！！！！！ （整理仪态） 还是姐姐好，抱！！！！！！！！！！
无缘再见的爱总是特别动人呢 恭喜可爱的有有写完这篇文，亲
写完了～～～～ 高兴啊～～～～～～～～～ 以后要把重点放在“冥想，在城市中央”和“不可能的承诺”…
好说好说~~~~ 我现在的成绩~~~~ 应该可以拿来暂时顶一会~~~ 其实这个周末我已经有努力的狂填坑了！！！！！ 亲姐姐~~~谢谢 姐姐来看我的东东~
有有14岁吗？^^作为14岁的小女生，你的文笔不错喔 搞好学习后，期待回来继续努力呀
什么全是b你啊还有a阿，还不少呢~~~哈哈你就是太谦虚了，好好学习这才是好孩子啊~你说对不对？？ 谦虚是对得 加油~~ 写的真好~~~PF
亲爱的姐姐 我今天真被吓死了！！！！！ 接到学校的成绩单 一看全都是B!!!!!! 我妈会抽4我的！