王者：从执教XYG开始

这么说的，槽点和毒点有时候有点多，看书的时候感觉有些地方逻辑一点都不顺畅，大部分都是在写选手参赛比赛，估计这本书应该没有多少生活之类的，一直都是在参赛，比赛拿奖励，预测本书章数不会超过400章，可能到了300章就开始烂尾了。

这本书很好看，就是大大能不能多更几章啊？

抛开剧情不谈，阅读感官是真的差，前面看下来基本上就是一句话一个段落，说话一会儿有引号，一会没引号，基本上没有逗号和句号，结尾全是感叹号，你的语文老师是这么教你写文章的吗？ 而且错误还不少，错别字就不说了，主角的名字一会儿江峰，一会儿姜晨。还有英雄问题，选的明明吕布，结果后面变成夏侯惇。 另外写的是要够简单就有多简单，本来还想看看作者对英雄的理解怎么样，到头来变成“先这样，再那样”，然后就完了，合着你是一点理解都没有。 还有复盘，比赛的时候发现的问题是不少，但是复盘的时候却一笔带过，稍微提一下都没有。 我算看出来了，作者对游戏的理解也就那样，一提到关键地方全是“略”！

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作者你需要很大的改进，没经过雕琢吧，想一出是一出，错别字很多，语句不通顺，看的我确实忍不住，而且你那个太水了吧，对局细节好歹写点，另外bp对弈这写是写啥啊😢😢😢

看到第25章，九月的露娜明明在前两场比赛中，表现的很好，在主角的帮助下，也是信心满满，后面对面的队伍在明知九月露娜技术已经很好的情况下，还拿露娜搞九月的心态(因为九月在之前的比赛露娜打的很烂，后面再主角开作弊器下，技术直线提高)，感觉作者写的太矛盾了，逻辑不顺。